Josh, I am so amazed in your progress. This is a fantastic peiece and you should be so proud. Here is the opening paragraph for the world to see.
A laugh so frightful, “MWA-HAHAHAAA” half the class gasping for air. “Your next,” Miss Gorrie says, with a sneaky smile. As the first two people got swelled bye the pitch black darkness, a yellow rope supports as twisting, turning leading us to a into a dead end or so we thought......
Josh, I am so amazed in your progress. This is a fantastic peiece and you should be so proud.
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A laugh so frightful, “MWA-HAHAHAAA” half the class gasping for air. “Your next,” Miss Gorrie says, with a sneaky smile. As the first two people got swelled bye the pitch black darkness, a yellow rope supports as twisting, turning leading us to a into a dead end or so we thought......
Good job Josh, I really like you`r story. It makes me want to read more. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteAwesome,Josh well done on the award.Miss Gorrie cool idea.
ReplyDeleteNice work Joshua very impressive. Good improvement you should be proud.
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ReplyDeleteWell done Josh keep it up.
ReplyDeleteWell done Joshua. I have seen how much you have excelled in your learning over the past 2 years. You should be proud.
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