WALT: Write an opening sentence that hooks the reader in.
Success Criteria:
• Makes the person who is reading it want to read more.
• Make them ask who,what, when and where things are happening.
Here are some samples
After school I went to John's house.
Our version:
"Knock,knock" I heard the door.
We went to the pools on Saturday.
Our version:
"Weeee Ka boom!"
We adventured into the warm atmosphere.
I was scared and walked into the forest.
Our Version:
The trees bristled as I took my first step into the sinster darkness.
Awesome Miss Gorrie I loved our writing activity.
ReplyDeleteThanks Miss Gorrie for making this year an awesome i wonder what else is going to be on this year this is only the start
ReplyDeleteIt was a awesome activity I really enjoyed it hope we can do it again.
ReplyDeleteLockie read me an interesting book called I wonder why spiders spin webs and other questions about creepy crawlies. He read it really well and learnt some very interesting facts about insects.
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ReplyDeleteLockie read Grandma mcgarvey and the puddle street gang and he read it very well and it was quite funny.
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